The Beach
Can I go for a swim?
Swoosh, Swoosh
Mum I don't want suncream on!
Swoosh, Swoosh
Mum I don't want suncream on!
Gee does she ever listen?
(By Danah)
Friday, June 6, 2008
EVERYDAY POEMS
In class we have been writing Everyday Poems. Everyday poems are about everyday events. They contain a line that is something SOMEONE would SAY, something SOMEONE would THINK, something YOU would SAY and a NOISE you might HEAR. You also have to REPEAT one of these lines in your poem. Here is the poem we made up in class:
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Hi Danah
Your poem is great.
Keep up the great work 4/5R.
From Danah's Mum
Hi Danah
Your poem is great.
Keep up the great work 4/5R.
From Danah's Mum
danah I really like your poem from annabel
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